What you think of this poem? Comment if u want :)?

It's pretty good but maybe you might want to look at the length of your sentences .I think it still flowed good .Maybe think about this .........Skies without limit blue in their scheme .....you don't need to over explain stuff in a poem. I'm not saying it's bad I only think you could clean it up some to make it a really great poem .I only did one sentence to show an example. Good job though .Keep writing.